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     I think disadvantages of mobile phones outweigh the advantages.
     Mobile phones are taking a very important role in our lives.Everyday,we use them at least three hours.And it is more than normal.They have a lot of disadvantages.
    Firstly,I will mention physical and mental disadvantages of them.Percentage of using glasses (or contact lens) increased because of this phones.And also they are destroying to our spinal cord,neck,waist...They have negative effects on our brain.Because of that we are forgetting necessary things.
    Another bad side of mobile phones is unsocializing our social life.We meet with our friends or relatives but we don't ask them their problems,we don't share our happinesses and sadnesses with them.We are only controlling our social media.What a pity!
    They also have bad effects on young people.They are trying everything they saw on the Internet and most of them are harmful.Also parents encounter difficulty when they want to control their children.Because every day new functions appearing.Parents don't know how to use this functions
and what their children do with that functions.
     As a conclusion we should limit the usage of mobile phones.This is healthier for everyone.


(This writing is for my English homework.)

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  1. etymologist24 Eylül 2018 01:30

    That's great writing. You should continue to write...

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  2. Unknown30 Eylül 2018 08:47

    Good job!! I agree with u.

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  3. sroach7 Ekim 2018 18:21

    Your article made me wonder if I could do without my phone. Hmm... I don't think so. I learn, share, follow my appointments and do many more on my phone.

    "Balance" is the key word, I believe.

    The article is well written. Keep up the good work. My best, Saadet Roach

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