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   In our town,a new supermarket offered a course about healthy eating and preparing healthy meals.My school class attended.I will explain my reviews.
   I really liked this course because it raised customers' awarenesses.I learnt a lot of things about healthy eating.I hope this course will help me to gain the habit of eating healthy foods.Actually majority knows something about healthy eating but most of them don't use that information in a daily life.
   The course was very effective.Some of the students changed their eating habits easily and now they are eating more healthily.Also some of them thinking that preparing healthy meals is very time-consuming.In my opinion it shouldn't be problem because preparing is the first  most important step to start.
   I want to give information about how other students could benefit from healthy eating and preparing healthy meals.For three weeks I am using techniques which I leatned and my life has changed.I am starting energetic to day and whole day I am being so energetic.I am understanding the lessons easier than three weeks ago.I think my brain is getting younger day by day.
   Eventually we should give importance to our lifes and we should make it healthier.

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  1. etymologist13 Ekim 2018 10:49

    Actually majority knows something about healthy eating but most of them don't use that information in a daily life.
    In my opinion it shouldn't be problem because preparing is the first most important step to start.

    Please correct the mistakes I have stated above. The general structure of the text is excellent.
    Well done!

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