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   Dear School Magazine Editor,
I read an article in magazine about how young people feel their methods of communication differ from that of their parents.
   There were some comments made in the article.To be honest,some of them made me upset.People are addicted to telephones so they could not imagine life without them even though it is just for letting their parents know where they are.Most of the parents purchase phones to their children to know where they are.I don't think that is dangerous.However when children grow,they want smart phones.This request creates danger.
   Another comment was about lack of communication.Today's people (especially teenagers) have communication gap with their friends.Percentage of people who communicate face to face is decreasing sharply.They are communicating by using technology.We are turning into robots.Most deplorable side of this fact is lack of communication which causes psychological issues.
   Some of the students complain about their parents' attitude related to technology.Because they think that their parents missed out on so much so they didn't have mobile phones or any technological devices.Actually,if we see the bright side,it's good situation.Because in those families communication is stronger and family members caring their problems.
   As a conclusion,we should use technology.It is necessary in this century.But as always we should limit ourselves.Enough is as good as a feast.
   Your sincerely

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  1. etymologist13 Ekim 2018 10:34

    Most deplorable side of this fact is lack of communication, which causes psychological issues.

    Please correct the sentence above. I really liked the letter and the choice of the words is really effective. I agree with you as to the concern about the moblile phones in the future.

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